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![]() It's a good paper. As a TA I would have given it a good grade. It reads more like a graduate level paper than undergrad.
If you feel so inclined, maybe some background info such as: -coral phylogenies have largely focused on skeletal structures -this is not possible with many soft corals, especially those lacking spicules -mitochondrial DNA appears to be a better means to investigate coral phylogenies -coral appearances can differ under different environmental conditions, for the same species Maybe some good questions: -what is the application? to identify species, biochemical processes that produce promising medical compounds? -is there merit to sequencing coral genetics? biomedical applications? -are there any ah-ha's? like all along we thought some corals were the same but in fact they are not... It's pretty good as is, but if you want to later tweak it... I ended up publishing many of my school papers just giving them complete overhauls to suit a hobbyist audience. You can get a few hundred bucks an article from the likes of TFH, as long as you've changed it so that it's something a reader would be interested in reading. You may also want to ask the mods to pull this post. You can't submit an article that you've already submitted/posted elsewhere... as publishers are buying the "first publication rights" |